5 Writing Tips for Web Designers 166
Poorly written web writing misleads visitors and wastes millions of hours daily. For today's more than one billion Internet users, that translates to frustration. For your web design clients, it means missed opportunities. Gain insight into highly effective web writing tactics that will help promote positive online experiences with every website you design and develop. Visitors will reward your clients with more leads and sales, and make you look good along the way.
1. Website Architecture Matters
Internet users are constantly bombarded and overwhelmed with endless layers of disjointed information on the Web. Don't fuel the chaos. Instead, structure information and lay out task steps in an intuitive manner to help visitors find the information they need and complete tasks, so they can get on with their busy lives.
Arrange your client’s website navigation, information and links according to their target audience’s needs rather than their corporate structure. Your client’s website is not organizational chart, so don't let it mimic one.
Case in point: a U.S.-based merger and acquisitions firm that approached Webcopyplus for help had a page dedicated to each of its departments (legal, accounting, sales, etc.). Visitors had to jump blindly to different sections of the website, guessing where they might find answers.
The solution: overhaul the website architecture and content to cater to each visitor’s specific needs: Sell a business; Buy a business; Additional services. While the nature of a business might be complicated, getting visitors to information relevant to their needs doesn't have to be.
2. Make the Web Writing Scannable
Do your clients’ websites force visitors to dig through long-winded intros, self-absorbed messages or useless paragraphs?
Studies indicate Internet users generally scan web writing, so keep it lean and clean. As a general rule, web writing should be less than half the length of copy you would use in traditional print media, such as brochures.
Take a page from professional web writers and use:
- Relevant headlines
- Subheads (also known as kickers)
- Bullet points
- Short, one-topic paragraphs
- Descriptive links
Always strive to cut down your client’s web writing into digestible chunks. Kill unnecessary words, and keep those sentences and paragraphs tight!
3. Use Plain Talk
People are often surprised to learn web writers at Webcopyplus aim to deliver web content at a grade-eight level. Clients and students alike ask: "Won’t this offend your audience?"
Not at all. There’s a vast difference between communicating simply and communicating poorly. Simple website content promotes effective communication. It is easily processed, understood and connects with readers. Poor communication hinders the information gathering process.
Many people fail to realize that most reputable national newspapers are also written at this level. Even TIME magazine, which is by and large deemed sophisticated, is written at a grade-ten level.
Why use extra syllables when it’s not necessary? This is often the result of a web writer’s ego getting in the way. For instance, consider this snippet from a florist’s website: "Pinkly pulchritudinous and amazingly delightful, infinitely charming and sensationally fascinating."
The website is selling pink roses, and it’s probably safe to say words like "pulchritudinous" alienate most of the audience. Beautiful or lovely would work just fine.
Web writing riddled with fancy abstract language and clichés might inflate a web writer’s pride or score a design agency an award or two, but it’ll do little for your clients’ businesses.
4. Keep Your Web Writing Consistent
Businesses often have several people adding content to websites at different times, which leads to inconsistencies.
Your client’s web writing should be reviewed from start to finish with a keen eye on:
- Spelling
- Format
- Style
- Narration
- Tense
- Flow
When targeting a specific market, our web writers frequently refer to style guides. For instance, when writing for the Canadian market, The Globe and Mail Style Book indicates you should use website. To address the US market, The New York Time Manual of Style and Usage suggests you use Web site.
At the end of the day, the key is to ensure your client’s web writing is consistent so it promotes a professional brand – one that builds trust and credibility.
5. Curb Your Enthusiasm
Enthusiasm is wonderful, if it’s sincere. Faking it – on or off the Web – comes across loud and clear.
In decades past, sales teams started off each week with pep meetings to stir up excitement. The overly-inspired salesman then jumped from door to door, entertaining his prospects as he pushed his goods.
Under the influence of artificial enthusiasm, he was a fast talker and wouldn’t take no for an answer. Prospects eventually resented the high-pressure pitches.
Today, those tactics aren’t tolerated for even a second. And that’s about how long it takes for an online visitor to click the back button.
"We’re the best business in Toronto!!!!!" reeks of rubbish. You’re stating: "We’ve got nothing to say, so we’re going to compensate our shortcoming with hype!"
Compelling quotes, and verified facts and figures will go a lot further to promote your client’s enthusiasm and cause. Leave the hype to the spammers.
About Rick Sloboda (the author of this post)
Rick Sloboda is a Senior Web Copywriter at Webcopyplus Professional Web Writing Services, which helps businesses boost online traffic and sales with optimized web copy. He speaks frequently at Web-related forums and seminars, and conducts web content studies with organizations in Europe and the U.S., including Yale University.
nice
A short and informative article. Thanks.
Yeah I hate the writing that’s unscannable the most
Indeed this article was short, but just as your aptly pointed out, keep it concise. The only thing I guess from an SEO point is that a short more concise article is also going to pull less keyword targeted traffic, but I suppose you could argue both ways on that one!
Regardless this is a fantastic article…Cheers!
Nice article Rick. You’ve pointed out the obvious and broken it down into handy bite size bits. Cheers
Thanks for this! I had no idea how hard it was to stay on message when building a portfolio/services site until I recently decided to re-work my site.
It started as a 2 week project, that was in November. The design has been done for a while, its the content that kills me. If I had the money I would gladly throw it all at a copywriter…
This is a very important topic which often is quite underestimated.
Good hints there!
Manuel
Designers should more take care of content. Thanks.
Thanks very much for your tips. Although I’m building websites in not-English language, these information can help me a lot.
I must keep them in mind. Cheers!
Thanks again wdw!!!!!
Not really tips for web designers but bloggers overall. Good stuff, nonetheless.
The article is good but why don’t you use semantic stricture in you website, when you give tips about it? It’s a table design site.
I nice little article just want to say this is a great site im a new designer and this site is brilliant help thanks keep up the good work
I completely agree with #5. That tends to be a downfall for many people
This is one aspect of designing a website that often doesn’t receive the attention it should. There are times when you may need to convince a client that maybe they do not know how to best put their business into words and that a professional copywriter may be worthwhile.
This was a refreshing read and applicable to my career. I Work on company web sites the inability to get buy-in on making the sites more client friendly is a battle fought daily withing my organization. This article really breaks things down simply and is something my business partners would be wise to learn from.
The org chart example hit the nail right on the head. For whatever reason the assumption is that the site must resemble the organizational structure.
As a blogger I read many of these types of articles, and this is another good one. I couldn’t agree more about #3. I may not be in the 8th grade anymore, but I like to ready easy content when I’m reading on the web…also makes it easier to skim when our minds can grasp the concepts faster.
I’m definitely going to pick up that New York Times manual. I always use “website” rather than Web site, and I’m American. I had no idea that there was such a technical difference. I could definitely use the manual to polish up!
These were some really great tips, and I appreciate you taking the time to write this article. (:
Great information. Feel kinda stupid now, so I going to run off and get that manual!
Nice stuff you have here. Liked the side panel demo.
Regards,
David